::sad nods:: wanking should be a happy thing and not quite so disgruntling.

;D

ooo, btw, took a glance again at the vid and I still think that it's more coherent later.

HOWEVER...what you might play around with is filters. I think one of the reasons why I got so confused in the beginning was figuring out they were separate incidences...or maybe they were overlapping measures? maybe if you color-tint the separate storylines?