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[Feedback for "Wouldn't It Be Lovely"]

First of all, let me say that I mostly know of Buffy through fic from silverlake.

Next: you have NO CLUE how hard it is to contain laughter while watching this so that I wouldn't wake my roommate. I may have popped an internal organ or two.

First reactions:

what is this song?

*this* song? ::disbelief::

huh?...Spike is.

WAH, socute! He's doing a red-riding hood! and, awww, he's.

::muffled snicker at him crashing into open door. nice timing on buffy's amusement!

Enormous...*chair*. ::SNERK::

Ooo, good timing on Giles' glasses removal and Buffy hitting his head.

Chocolate at blood!

Oo, nice timing on the fire with the candles!

That skip with the kiss is nicely timed, tho the extended kissing sequences are slightly much, "warm feet"?, but that last kiss's timing is great.

::snickers:: his look of disgust! And the timing of the jump cut of willow on "wouldn't"!

The whole sequence from 0:52 to 0:59 is brilliant! The action matches the music *perfectly*, I love the head turning and the intercutting of the two groups!

THE CHAIR HOPPING on "still"! ::DIES::

The arrows with the soft notes and the look at the arrow!! HEE! I love the timing of that and the fighting heh, the man=>bear on "spring" and his look!

The falling and the fade and then his look at the "ding!" is *great*!

The dead resting on my knee is hilarious clip choice!

The spread arms at "wouldn't" is PERFECT. So's the reaching at "lovely" and Willow's expression!.

That last thumbs up! And Buffy's expression! HEEE!

Overall, this was SUCH a fun vid! It bounces along and is gleefilled and hilarious, you mostly take advantage of your beats and some of your timing and clip choices are wonderful! Great stuff!

[Feedback for "Move Your Feet"]

This was so. freaking. FUN. And I LOVE your use of movement!

First reactions:

love the intercutting on the first several seconds.

0:29 love the jump cuts here!

love the use of the bell!

great use of movement to the song around 0:37!

I love the color change from dark to light at 0:48, and great timing on "street", love the intercutting between willow/tara and tara floating!

Cute dance squence with xander and nice intercutting on that last part

the door fallin on that last beat!

HEE! The demon wiggling his hips!

nice timing on "sing along" and "dead and gone"

The bits of buffy practicing is great too, love what you did with the cuts of Buffy's face against the flames on 1:56, good timing with spike throwing, nice repeat with the hands holding/letting go.

2:43!!! PERFECT use of that clip to match to the song!

Great ending with the intercutting clips and the fade on "yeah", nicely matching the sharpness to the song with the sharp cuts and the soft cut on "yeah".

Overall, great song choice! It moves and is bouncy, the song didn't change much but you compensated for that with the increasing tension. (it was possibly helped by the increasing intensity of the source material?) Love your use of repeating clips/movements and reversing the timing of certain clips! Theme-wise, what I'm guess at is that you might be drawing parallels between the three couples and the tension of the third couple not pairing up? Good stuff! Nice vid!

To everyone else:
I would highly recommend ya'll to take a peek at these vids, nice work thats very bouncy and very very fun.

You can find them [here] and be sure to send feedback!!