Wow. I think there are some changes since I saw the earlier version, and they work - the narrative flow works really well and is a lot stronger. Putting Tenpou and Kenren in ties in beautifully with the lyrics and I loved the little flashes of Tenpou and Hakkai's opening eye - it's gorgeous. And yay! for red haired Gojyo:D
I especially liked the bit with the blonde haired woman and the link to Gojyo's mother. It completely got across the comparison and link between her tears and Gojyo's mother crying and what it might mean to Gojyo. I thought that having an animated shot of Gojyo's mum might work better though, as the still shot (was it from the manga?) just seemed too... still. I felt like there should be more movement there, if that makes any sense at all.
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I especially liked the bit with the blonde haired woman and the link to Gojyo's mother. It completely got across the comparison and link between her tears and Gojyo's mother crying and what it might mean to Gojyo. I thought that having an animated shot of Gojyo's mum might work better though, as the still shot (was it from the manga?) just seemed too... still. I felt like there should be more movement there, if that makes any sense at all.