and everything made it very strong as the "darkest point" of the video, with the blackness closing in on everything and choking off possibility for life and love and positive connection, only negative connection of echoing the past and associations with hurt and death.
::squees::
And then the way you followed that with opening everything up with the silhouette of the bell-ringing for sunrise and leaving the full frame open and bright and renewal and sunlight
::nods:: incidentally, that scene is sorta like the Death tarot...in that it's as much 'change' as 'endings' as 'death'. The woman (who was a youkai sent after the scripture) let herself be killed with her sisters (blackmail and the commitment to each other were the only reason they were after the scripture anyways)...the bell is a death knoll.
shown with full-frame shots, the full picture, the full experience, layered again with the helping each other towards the open doorway to summarize but still using the whole screen and they're always together not cut off from each other anymore by the framing, and then open and outside and ready to travel on.
YES. so much yes! I am just...unspeakably *esctatic* that all this came through, that you got like everything and yet this was your first vid and just ::amazed and awed and uttely thankful for your feedback::
Just...wow. This whole thing just makes me thankful and more energized and more...just..
wow.
You officially get first look at the current Saiyuki vid I'm poking at...=D that is, if you want. It's still in the developmental stage but I should have a partial draft done within the month. Email me at kanzeyori@yahoo.com if you have the time to peek and/or chat about it...
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::squees::
And then the way you followed that with opening everything up with the silhouette of the bell-ringing for sunrise and leaving the full frame open and bright and renewal and sunlight
::nods:: incidentally, that scene is sorta like the Death tarot...in that it's as much 'change' as 'endings' as 'death'. The woman (who was a youkai sent after the scripture) let herself be killed with her sisters (blackmail and the commitment to each other were the only reason they were after the scripture anyways)...the bell is a death knoll.
shown with full-frame shots, the full picture, the full experience, layered again with the helping each other towards the open doorway to summarize but still using the whole screen and they're always together not cut off from each other anymore by the framing, and then open and outside and ready to travel on.
YES. so much yes! I am just...unspeakably *esctatic* that all this came through, that you got like everything and yet this was your first vid and just ::amazed and awed and uttely thankful for your feedback::
Just...wow. This whole thing just makes me thankful and more energized and more...just..
wow.
You officially get first look at the current Saiyuki vid I'm poking at...=D that is, if you want. It's still in the developmental stage but I should have a partial draft done within the month. Email me at kanzeyori@yahoo.com if you have the time to peek and/or chat about it...