ohhh, I see what you were saying now. ::GLOMPS YOU MORE:: 'cause, see, I'm not naturally a narrative vidder, so I'm really glad that you got a sense of story from the vid. I'm glad that the splicing together of the scenes worked, because I know that I jumped around in time, and the structure of the vid (time-wise) is a bit odd and back-forth.

I'm glad that the parallels shows through; it was something that I tried and...well, you never know if something works unless someone mentions it, y'know? =)

Thank you for your feedback, it makes me smile and squee.