100_roadtrips challenge 26, (triple drabble)

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Originally meant for 100_roadtrips, and then I realized that I should just call a spade a spade (or in this case, a ficlet a ficlet), and quit abusing mod rights. So ya'll get to see my random bit o' unbeta'ed smut.

Title: Heat (or The One Where Hakkai Was Sorta Evil, In A Really Good Way)
Word Count: 300
Fandom: Saiyuki
Pairing: 58
A'N: I took a break from studying, so sue me. Also, non-worksafe.

The curtains, and there were several layers of translucent white mosquito netting and pale cotton to catch flies and light and breezes, they brushed against the skin of Gojyo's thighs. The air was sticky and the whole world felt flushed and he can barely hold his face straight, barely keep his mouth from falling open to catch some stray breath of air, barely keep his taunts coherent at monkey on the street below -- it was a too-hot day with enough wind to billow the thick curtains, and so it wasn't strange to be shirtless -- Gojyo rationalizes this to himself as he crosses his forearms against the windowsill as he's teasing the monkey as he desperately tries not to let out his gasps. That damned monk just looked at him and his, his damnably long hair swaying just a little too much for the wind, (back-forth, back-forth), he hopes townsfolk are less observant than Sanzo who just smirks at him, yet Gojyo can't help but feel (ohgodthere) unbearably smug, a voice teasing behind curtains and the edge of his hearing, "be normal, Gojyo," as Sanzo tempts the monkey away, towards meatbuns, and he swore (from the side of his mouth) as Hakkai's fingers just pressed a little, more, into his sides, stroked them just a little, harder, his cock just a little, deeper, and (ohfuck) Gojyo just about opens his mouth when Hakkai yanked him back with his teeth on Gojyo's neck and lets him scream into the cup of his hand as Hakkai licked at the sweat that rose from the back of his neck as they came and came and collasped against each other and the wall below the window in the middle of the curtains and the wind and the light and the heat.

_{Author's Note The Second: When the challenge stated "between the sheets", it didn't state that the sheets had to be hortizontal...}

Comments

[wildelamassu.livejournal.com]

Guh. You channel Faulkner and bring me porn. *loves*

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::grins and bows:: t'was my pleasure, and I'm glad you like!

[devikun.livejournal.com]

Oh my GOD. Seriously ded from the hawt secks in the open window! Hakkai is horn. Gojyo is porn. You, P-chan, pwn!

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=D ::gigglefit:: thankee lovely lady! ::glomps::

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Woah. This was nice to wake up to. Hakkai is evil in the best way ever. XD

[baka-gaijin.livejournal.com]

I loved this take on the 'sheets' challenge. I envy anyone who can put such a strong visual image together in just 100 words. Great sex!

[new-kate.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh thank you thank you
*dizzy from the hot and the incredible beauty*

[nightengale.livejournal.com]

You know...I think this counts as voyeurism. It is certainly going a long way toward satisfying my voyeurism kink, at least. *__*

And it took me so. fucking. long. to type that sentence 'cause spelling that word, twice, should not be one of my concerns right now...

Anyways, DUDE. Love. I can't imagine what got them INTO this situation, but the 'sound' of Hakkai's disembodied voice, Gojyo's distance from him, the attempt to doubletask, the breathy not-nicely-segmented narrative...THIS:

That damned monk just looked at him and his, his damnably long hair

Which to a first reading before you get past the comma just sounds like "him and his," "his" being HAKKAI, and see that's actually accurate because Sanzo *knows* Hakkai is there...

But then you pass the comma and the pretend cover story, which really doesn't cover anything, takes over, and the image of Gojyo's hair swinging--[I'd like to take this moment to say that WL's icon is currently right. below. this. comment. and that Gojyo's hair in it is distracting the FUCK out of me]--is just--

*______________* thanks.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

♥

[broken--bird.livejournal.com]

oh, god. mm. mm. (sanzo, you rat bastard.) terminal nosebleed time. [loves] [is dead]

[blu-mondae.livejournal.com]

Dude.

The part of me that used to go to Sunday School is telling me there's something very, very wrong about reading this on a Sunday morning. Fortunately the part of me that hasn't been religious for years and years can kick the other part's ass.

*reads ficlet again, thinks happy smutty thoughts*

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::grins:: ain't he just? =D

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=D thank you!

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::does victory sign:: thank *you* for the fb! =D

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XD the ficlet is versatile...mostly I wrote it to satisfy my exhibitionist kink.

And yay! you got that comma thing!!

::grins and bows::

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. I can't imagine what got them INTO this situation,:

Gojyo was remarking on how he can hold his smile for so long under...adverse conditions. Which meant that Gojyo needed proper training for self-control. And Gojyo liked to display himself so dearly, to anyone, really, and who is Hakkai to be contrary to the wishes of others? Properly expressed or otherwise?

::snicker::

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=D Sadly I couldn't trim it down. poop.

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::grins and bows::

[permetaform]

HEEEE! yay! victory!

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Hey, we appreciate your restraining yourself. XD

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=P but that means less porn for the community!

sadness.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

It is 300 words. You could call it a triple drabble.

[lierdumoa.livejournal.com]

HOLYCRAP.

::bows down::



unrelated note: http://www.livejournal.com/users/yahtzee63/34296.html

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...

::peers:: see, but it's unbroken...

::ponders:: and I'd posted it, and looked at it and.

god, run it by majinkarp first or something?

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EEE! High praise, esp. from you! =D

[lullula.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was lovely! And so very hot >D

[hibem.livejournal.com]

...gah. I can't even put two words together to express the hotness, so I shall quote: ohfuck.


_{Is there anything- anything I can do to bribe you into [Bad username or site: 4th_and_austin? @ livejournal.com]}

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=D thank you!

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heeee! yay! victory! =D ::grins and bows::

what was that lj name? o.0?

[hibem.livejournal.com]

4th_and_austin _{...and now I'm vaguely ashamed for randomly pimping this, but whatever. Sorry!}

[cicer.livejournal.com]

*dead from icon love*

[cicer.livejournal.com]

......

OMGWTFHOTTEST85PORNEVER!!1!

I am dead from the sexiness. I cannot express how fabulous this is. So, so good. *pants*

It's times like this that I'm so grateful for this icon...

[majinkarp.livejournal.com]

So. Hot. Post it.

[nightengale.livejournal.com]

Voyeurism, exhibitionism, two sides of one luscious coin...Hmm, karotsamused would have something R&G coin-related to say, I'm sure....*is bricked for crossing fandoms*

I melt over the hair, so of course you use the hair icon....^^;; It's not myyyyy fault long hair sends me wibbling!!

To avoid spamming: in RE to the comment below: Dude. Of course. I could have thought of that if I'd bothered but I was more focused on rereading the porn. XD XD

And yes, of course I got the comma thing. I'm detailed that way. ^_~

On two unrelated notes:

- You're on my friends list so you're eligible, but I know you don't regularly read my journal, so I figure I'll poke you...want free stuff? XD

- *polite poke* Vid feedback? ^_^

[kintail.livejournal.com]

Guh... wow.

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::grins and bows::

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=) thank you!

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vid feedback forthcoming =)

Re: It's times like this that I'm so grateful for this icon...

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XD

'k