permetaform: (::ponder:: [butterstick_'s base])
permetaform ([personal profile] permetaform) wrote2003-12-21 05:51 am

...shackles, like this and that...

Piece #3 for [livejournal.com profile] circe_tigana's 882 Ways to Appease the Heathen Gods challenge

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"Papa?" Moonlight don't reach where she ground her corn.

"Chil' you kept the coin?" It is late and she is alone.

"Yes, right here. Papa, you going t'buy me free n--" her large eyes widened as the wind bent the tree and showed the moon.

"Shh don't scream chil' don't scream."

Her shriek rang across the plantation. There was rustling in the fields behind him. He reached out and twisted her head and her body collapsed in his arms.

"Bo'sun, you got the piece?"

"Yes. Go now, before they search." Never had he been so glad to be numb.

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dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] ciceqi for her birthday!
melusina: (deppified - hero)

[personal profile] melusina 2003-12-21 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh!

That was marvelous - creepy and sad and moving.

I *swear* this is the Best Challenge Ever.

[identity profile] stungunbilly.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man.
Just.
I sort of knew one of the stories had to be like this, and.
Ouch.
But wow, also.

[identity profile] twistingflame.livejournal.com 2003-12-27 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
Meep.

That last line is a killer.

[identity profile] twistingflame.livejournal.com 2003-12-28 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Well, it was definitely worth the abandonment of warm warm sheets. It's just so...yeah. And it doesn't cease to hurt when you read it again and again.